This is first line (unamended) for a story idea that I had for my first competition entry... that's if I make the deadline.
Mrs Pilkington shuffled home along the pavement, dragging her tartan shopping trolly along in her wake.
Mrs Pilkington shuffled home along the pavement, dragging her tartan shopping trolly along in her wake.
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I would really welcome constructive comments or perhaps even some inspiration. To be honest , I would settle for some encouragement.